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Carrie's avatar

Loved it. Especially "And a voice peeked through the fog with strange black eyes". At first I thought it was a voice in his head. But guess it could have been the voice of whomever he was seeing. I will be doing a book about colonization someday. It is very much on my " to write" list.

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Harvey Stanbrough's avatar

Thanks. Sometimes I get lucky with a turn of phrase. :-)

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