Note: One astute reader apparently lost sleep over a wayway repeated phrase I inadvertently left in this story, so I came back and deleted that line.
Creepy and hilarious all in one. I sort of saw Johnny's end coming, but not the details. Not the blue tongue for sure, or her dad being in on it.
I love the line "Big strong hero? That didn't sound right. But whatever." 😄
I couldn't put it down. Captivating and surprising!
Thanks, Rex.
I saw his demise coming, but I still enjoyed the lead up to it. Did you leave the typos in because it was an older story?
Hi Bob. The short answer is yes. If there were typos, I didn't notice them when I re-read it. Another reader pointed out the phrase "tools of the trade." If I'd noticed that, I would have omitted the second short sentence about her "clutch." (grin)
I gotta admit, I didn't see that coming!
Me either. :-)
Creepy and hilarious all in one. I sort of saw Johnny's end coming, but not the details. Not the blue tongue for sure, or her dad being in on it.
I love the line "Big strong hero? That didn't sound right. But whatever." 😄
I couldn't put it down. Captivating and surprising!
Thanks, Rex.
I saw his demise coming, but I still enjoyed the lead up to it. Did you leave the typos in because it was an older story?
Hi Bob. The short answer is yes. If there were typos, I didn't notice them when I re-read it. Another reader pointed out the phrase "tools of the trade." If I'd noticed that, I would have omitted the second short sentence about her "clutch." (grin)
I gotta admit, I didn't see that coming!
Me either. :-)