Nicely done, Harvey! Fight scenes are hard. This one feels raw and real, but what really gives it weight is the bond under it. The misunderstanding and the way the dock hands remain allies afterward makes the story feel human and honest.
A few drops of Jensen's blood from his runny nose hit me as he shook his head, trying to shake off his damage. It didn't work for him, but that's okay, he deserved what happened to him. The bigger they are, the harder they fall. He got what he deserved for pulling a sneak attack. I turned around, got my cash, and decided to leave the dock, maybe forever.
Hi Harvey! For a minute there, I stepped right out of my ordinary universe. What a treat!
Thanks, Diedre.
Sounds similar to Reacher but better.
Thanks, Mike.
Nicely done, Harvey! Fight scenes are hard. This one feels raw and real, but what really gives it weight is the bond under it. The misunderstanding and the way the dock hands remain allies afterward makes the story feel human and honest.
Thanks, Gary.
A few drops of Jensen's blood from his runny nose hit me as he shook his head, trying to shake off his damage. It didn't work for him, but that's okay, he deserved what happened to him. The bigger they are, the harder they fall. He got what he deserved for pulling a sneak attack. I turned around, got my cash, and decided to leave the dock, maybe forever.
Yeah, but with a beer in my gut and Jensen shaking my hand. :-)
The best stories happen in the dock office on payday, Harvey! This may be the best. Keep ‘em coming!
Thanks, Nan! :-)